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two pieces - a poem
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Skrivet den 2006-07-31 08:04:07

ohhsnapple

[font color="red"]You told me you love me.
I told you I loved you.
You promised you'd love me forever.
You snapped into two.
You [font color="black"]never really[/font] liked me.
But it's clear to you now.
We were never meant to be.
You made me fall in love with you.
And then broke my heart into two.
After all the pain you caused me.
[font color="black"]I STILL LOVE YOU![/font][/font]

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Skrivet den 2006-07-31 14:13:53

Dhani4ever84

that was good!!I really liked it.

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Skrivet den 2006-07-31 19:11:00

ohhsnapple

^thanx.. the ending sux though... .. and like they say.. write what you know..

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Skrivet den 2006-07-31 21:55:47

Beautiful-Lies

umm well..its good but could use a little work...but its good

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Skrivet den 2006-07-31 22:14:56

ohhsnapple

Yeah.. i know the ending kinda sux... i've been trying to finish it .. but i'm writers blocked..

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Skrivet den 2006-08-01 00:02:35

Beautiful-Lies

yeah i know how u feel...i get like that sometimes when i write my songs

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Skrivet den 2006-08-03 03:51:11

Sensei

I am not a critic....I tend to say either I like the poem or I didn't like it. In this case, I like it. You seem to communicate your feelings well.
But I noticed you had trouble getting your HTML color tags to work so I'll help you out.

I think you meant for the words to be in bold text where you wrote font so I've done that. I hope this helps.

You told me you love me.
I told you I loved you.
You promised you'd love me forever.
You snapped into two.
Younever really liked me.
But it's clear to you now.
We were never meant to be.
You made me fall in love with you.
And then broke my heart into two.
After all the pain you caused me.
I STILL LOVE YOU!

Code:

[color=red]You told me you love me.
I told you I loved you.
You promised you'd love me forever.
You snapped into two.[/color]
[color=black]You[b]never really[/b] liked me.
But it's clear to you now.
We were never meant to be.
You made me fall in love with you.
And then broke my heart into two.
After all the pain you caused me.
[b]I STILL LOVE YOU![/b][/color]

Use this to see how I made the colors and biold text.

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Skrivet den 2006-08-03 04:11:41

ohhsnapple

oh.. .yeah.. thanx for the comment... and thanx for the help color coding..

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Skrivet den 2006-08-03 05:09:23

Sensei

You're welcome. Keep writing.

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