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2 poems that i would like ur opinion on
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Skrivet den 2006-08-01 00:10:43

Beautiful-Lies

hey here are 2 poems i would like ur opinion on

sorrow angel

If you look into them eyes
you'll see that deep down inside
all the pain that has been left in this poor girl
if you look even deeper
you see all her life stories
that eventually turned into lies
but can you see the halo above her head?
can you feel everything she feels?
The little angel has been in trouble.
she has felt her own pain
with that gentle voice
and her soft loving heart
she is in pain
her pain is trapped inside
danger awaits this angel
her future now lies ahead.

Underneath my skin[/u]

Your perfect just the way you are
dont let them bring you down
your beautiful in every way
why do i feel ugly?
why do i feel pain?
is it because i cant stand this body im in?
"your fat,you ugly"
dont they see they are making me insane
with all my self concious thoughts...
i look in the mirror
i see a girl that i hate
ask myself one more question
why me?
why did god choose to put me through this hell of a misery?

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Skrivet den 2006-08-01 01:40:23

Dhani4ever84

I like them.I like the second one more though.I always feel that way!lol.

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Skrivet den 2006-08-01 01:51:46

Beautiful-Lies

thanks

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Skrivet den 2006-08-01 02:15:07

Caitywink

i like the second one a bit better, i think I can relate to it more, plus because of the way it rhymes it flows more. but i like them :)

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Skrivet den 2006-08-01 02:31:13

Beautiful-Lies

thanks caity

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Skrivet den 2006-08-01 04:20:37

Cygnus

From the Merriam-Webster Dictionary:

Citat:

po·et·ry
Pronunciation: 'pO-&-trE, -i-trE also 'po(-)i-trE
Function: noun
1 a : metrical writing : VERSE b : the productions of a poet : POEMS
2 : writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm
3 a : something likened to poetry especially in beauty of expression b : poetic quality or aspect <the poetry of dance>

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Skrivet den 2006-08-01 12:39:53

BibFortuna

could they be talking about poultry instead of poetry?

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Skrivet den 2006-08-01 23:42:36

Beautiful-Lies

lol

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Skrivet den 2006-09-08 22:54:49

bstyng911

i think that they are amazing and i really enjoyed reading them. i felt the pain of the person and it touched me. it is great! :P

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Skrivet den 2006-09-09 01:08:44

Beautiful-Lies

thanks alot...i love them too

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Skrivet den 2006-09-09 08:51:08

Cygnus

Citat:

could they be talking about poultry instead of poetry?

Nope. I'm pretty sure M-W meant poul--er, poetry.

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Skrivet den 2006-09-09 15:44:26

Beautiful-Lies

lol

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